aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cityscape]

ur a great artist

but one little thing ive noticed through ur work is that when u should have straight lines you never do all your buildings are most blatantly not straight other than that tho amazing stuff great colour use and attention to the detail

Kamikaye responds:

Thx :) Yea .. lines are something I need to practice I usually prefer organic and round forms :S

[Ballad of fat Sam]

not bad

keep at it you have potential hands are hard I know but try and work at them also dont try and mimic the shades in the image because its much easier if you just make the light a lil stronger and shading a little heavier you get better contrast

poison-bananas responds:

I know what your saying, i try to go for subtle shadow changes but it ends up looking less effective. hands are indeed hard =p ill keep at it thanks for the CC

[Long Smoke]

noice

i dunno why this has such a bad score this is really good very stylized fun shading good skin tones it deserves a high 3 at the very least

[Sasha]

wow

amazing colouring but the pose on the character feels off like her posture points her chest really far out almost falling back not that its wrong it just feel a lil off

[Zev vs Zelotian Soldier]

noice

reminds me of Lilliana from magic the gathering

[I have a bad habit.]

sorry for repeating what others have said

^ yet again but this really is way to small to be able to appreciate at all the image looks not bad but kinda came short with the tacked on filters and the half wit angst humor in the comments over all its good your trying to define yourself but try and avoid filters they scream noob and larger images even if they take a little longer to load are always highly appreciated because you can take in every detail so much better i like the idea of the smoky effect shooting the character up but like i said before filters kinda kill it

Sorrygirl99 responds:

I can't make it bigger... sadly, the program i use won't make it any bigger, but i am trying to make it bigger, SO DO NOT FRET.

[Contrasts]

yet again

yet again another reason why your on my favorites list

Hoboweasel responds:

Hehe, thanks man. This was experimental, I didn't really think about it too much, just let things come to me... It turned out fairly interesting though. :J

[Page 4]

not bad

solid colouring but you need to work on your angles your characters feel increadably flat from an angle

[ninja pete]

really good

this is s really good but it needs a little more depth