aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirby's Christmas Gift]

Pritty good the only thing that seems off is the lack of shadows on the ground. Since the light source seems strong there should be some reasonably heavy set shadows.

[Life goes on]

wow great inks I just wish the pictires were bigger so I could se the details better.

natahem responds:

Thanks!
I have indeed a bigger version of this drawings, but it was quite too big to fill on a screen. I should try to find a compromise :)

[The Murmuring Thing]

This has got a lot of zero's which surprises me I mean it is nothing crazy good but I still enjoy it especially the background

[Not quite dead yet]

very nice but the contrast and quality defiantly needs to be adjusted on the scan

[Sea Cave]

all that needs to be said is...

<3

[dat pencil]

Really good

everything's perfect except the chin is a little off

[Nightmare]

not bad

good attention to detail and I really like how you approched the background but the characters arms are different lengths and his bottom left hand is backwards :P

[Incantation]

Really good

The shading is fantastic great depth and detail fantastic work the only thing is the woman's out of proportion she needs to be taller and not so skinny try giving bigger curves and a little more height but outside that really fantastic!

[Pyro in colour]

well..

good lighting but never use the fill tool when drawing

SugarCain responds:

Thanks !

[Ursaw Major and Ursaw Minor]

wow

looks just like bear from Jamie Smart haha fun stuff