aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fight Club]

Looks really good but it could use a bit more definition. Get in there with some thin lines and just bring him out so he isn't so blended.

[Natalia]

She just needs some texture on her but outside that very good.

[Tooth]

I really like this it is very cute and minimalistic. If you defined him a little more it would be perfect.

[The Mill]

This is actually a really interesting piece. The messy nature really gives the impression of a chaotic environment.

[hot diggity dog!]

Keep in mind design is about being simple while being interesting and there is way to much going on in this image. It is also a good idea to try and combine the typography with the image so the viewer actually takes in the name and knows what the company is.

Allisawn responds:

Hmm yeah this is a fair criticism but given the fact that I'm in a high school class and an image of hot dog clip art probably would've sufficed I don't mind much
And is there really that much going on? It's a hot dog on fire hahaha

[Burfday]

Me too it is a weird feeling knowing you are starting the things that will eat most of your life.

[AAPT #002]

Looks good but why is the first panel all blurry?

mastergloyd responds:

It's from Sketch's point of view as he's waking up.

[Gorilla]

Looks really good but lacks deffinition. Some dark strokes around key points would help alot

[Skin/Blending Tutorial]

Getting pores on the skin is what I have always had a hard time with this is great thanks. This is coming from someone who has never used a tutorial in my life.

[I think I broke something...]

The picture is there you just need to fill in the details now. The piece looks good but feels like it is still very rough.

TaraGraphika responds:

Yeah...When far it looks complete...Oh....well~~the eyes deceive my thoughts...:)

Thank you:D