aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Undead Knight]

well

THIS IS SPARTA

[Yoruichi]

not bad

but the lighting makes no sense and you clearly traced this in illustrator

Maszrum responds:

Photoshop. Lineart was made in Photoshop.

[E]

wow

Common man with a piece like this you have to at least have some kinda comment :/

[WATCH YO MUTHA TRUCKAH MOUTH]

wellllll

for starters your missing the top of the head >.>

na i kid it's really good there isn't alot to be said your proportions are all correct and the expression is priceless

[Is He alone?]

rolfenburgers

yup hes alone

ehix responds:

Are you sure ? ;) I think you should try harder. Maybe play a little with btightness and contrast ? :)

[EYE BOL]

good detail

it must have been hard pencil being so smudgy at times either that or you did this the size of the page but please do not draw anime like Deidaras said animes a ok starting point but its a place you start not to revert back to and i have no idea what ornery was on about looks to me you got the detail round the eye correct maybe the brow was a needs a few more lashes but thats purely the model or person your drawing and can hardly be considered wrong

[Cut in to pieces]

hmmm

i really injoy the 2d style u do it nicely a little cliche in the image but great presentation