aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ghostie]

good but

shes to white you can bearly see her for a lil there i thought it was just a head

PixelCake responds:

I think it's your screen brightness or colorblindness?...she's very blue, not white. She's the kinda blue you get when you choke a NewGrounds noob with a leather belt for fifteen minutes.

[Saved]

oooooook

cough watches to much naruto cough

exninja123 responds:

unfortunately i used to watch naruto...
you should get that cough checked :/

[Aoi the Bunny Demon]

wooooooo

man does she ever look happy

exninja123 responds:

yup XD

[Black Cat]

nice

needs bigger tits tho :P

Sabtastic responds:

No u

[4th page]

hmmm not bad

but ur missing the girls back hair its really large so u should be able to see it n u lack any background so there standing in a random white nothingness god shading tho but try n do a lil transistion even if its just a lil when doing the full on blacck ohhh n not bad dialog its more natural than most noob comics

TheOmiyan responds:

This page is'nt actualy done it obviously needs some fixing up, but thanks for being honest

[makes you stranger]

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J-o-a-n responds:

your things are really better, most original

[Hank Wallpaper]

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i hate fan art but i like your style

Rhunyc responds:

Well, good. :) Glad I got style. ;)

[lonely day]

welllll

why not talk about what inspired u?

i like the shading looks great but the heads a lil to big n theres alot of empty space makes u feel lost

TheOmiyan responds:

yeah thats true i scanned it in wrong . . . again.