aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chibi Jamie Woods]

I like it you have great shading and good expression. You should try a few different techniques with hair though the hair feels like it is a bit scattered between two styles.

Also I like Jamies style :P

deadsmileface responds:

thnx

[Brothers]

"Did I just lose my house because of you" if what i think you meant to say. Not bad though really clean.

P-cate responds:

thank you for telling me that!, i already fixed it C:.

[hot diggity dog!]

Keep in mind design is about being simple while being interesting and there is way to much going on in this image. It is also a good idea to try and combine the typography with the image so the viewer actually takes in the name and knows what the company is.

Allisawn responds:

Hmm yeah this is a fair criticism but given the fact that I'm in a high school class and an image of hot dog clip art probably would've sufficed I don't mind much
And is there really that much going on? It's a hot dog on fire hahaha

[AAPT #002]

Looks good but why is the first panel all blurry?

mastergloyd responds:

It's from Sketch's point of view as he's waking up.

[I think I broke something...]

The picture is there you just need to fill in the details now. The piece looks good but feels like it is still very rough.

TaraGraphika responds:

Yeah...When far it looks complete...Oh....well~~the eyes deceive my thoughts...:)

Thank you:D

[Life goes on]

wow great inks I just wish the pictires were bigger so I could se the details better.

natahem responds:

Thanks!
I have indeed a bigger version of this drawings, but it was quite too big to fill on a screen. I should try to find a compromise :)

[Pyro in colour]

well..

good lighting but never use the fill tool when drawing

SugarCain responds:

Thanks !

[Chalk Pastel Portrait]

if thats the case...

If you're so determined to prove that this work, which does not match the quality of the rest of your gallery is in fact real. Then perhaps, process work, or shots of the piece in progress over the 2-3 weeks you worked on it would help ease my doubts. Surely a project of this magnitude at 22 x32 would have adequate process work.

LilioTheOne responds:

I did all of it at school and never really expected it to turn out good or even be worth posting online. If it would make you sleep better, you can pm me for the original photograph I worked off of or other angle shots. I'm not exactly sure how you think I faked this though. Do you think I just used some big photograph and drew over it or something like that? Stealing it is really out of the question seeing how I have both the original photograph and can provide as many different angle shots as you want. I'm not really sure what you're acussing me off.

[Deadly Addiction]

nice

i really enjoy the mixed styles

but as far as smoking goes i really feel smokers get a little to much hate these days and everyone's really paranoid of smokers

kyowell responds:

no hate intended, this was directed at my mom and i was just trying to get a point across to her.