heyyy
not bad 4 a 1st timer im not fond of stickfigures not many ppl are but at leas u did them properly
heyyy
not bad 4 a 1st timer im not fond of stickfigures not many ppl are but at leas u did them properly
thanks :3
lol
you realize there are people from all over the world here you should prolly say american independence day and this flash was rather repetitive the beauty of animation is you can out do reality if your making fire works do sumthing insane n not possable
First of all, you did not 'lol'. You did not laugh out loud. If you did, then you have a disorder of some sort. And you should probably look up 'punctuation' in the dictionary because I couldn't understand what the hell you were trying to say.
well
a few subtitles would be nice most of us here only speak english
You're right dude. For the next time!
not bad
animation was simple bu worked decent drawings n fbf but everything was very messy n looked bad at time if u went over n cleaned everythng up it look better
Thanks for the critique, I will certainly note all of that down for the future. I know I need to improve (a heap!) but this is my first ever animation and I'm slowly learning how to make things neater and more visually appealing.
Thanks for the review!!!
erp
if u want to be a reconized flash author try not using sprites its like cheating taking away half the skill
Im can' animate my own sprites?! it's suck than!
great work
this was great there was alot of potential here. The sound was very well chosen n really set a mood. Decent animation didnt care 4 the art myself needless to say it was fairly decent. The voices especially the end "wth" was really distant n lacked quality which isnt a big deal honestly thats prolly u just not having a decent mic at ur disposal. The idea was fairly cleaver n well presented. The only other prob i noticed was that the shading n such was awkward or didnt make any sence n well u arnt a profesional likely so who am i to point to much finger anywho great work good to see sumthing of this calibur from sumone new on the portal than the same old famous ppl
Yeah, if you donated several hundred dollars to the Ox Sox Foundation (TM) I promise to improve voice acting quality. However until that day you'll have to live with, what I agree, is somewhat poor mic quality. As for the artwork problems, all I can do is practice right? Thanks for the review, hope to hear from you again in my next movie.
XD.
in canada that would be a coin OMFGWTFROLFENCOPTERSAYWAAAAAAAAAA
same here in Australia but i figured more Americans on here than aussies so i used a note
great drawings
greats art and sound sych but the animation fbf was strngly lacking or glitchy u need to add more frames to a fullarm extension rather than 3 for instance n ya work out the animation and youll have great stuff
waaaa
isnt this what help n faq is 4 ?
No. Stop being a fag.
well
ummmm ok nothing happened he just walkeed u pasted 5 frames in a loop with a lil text not only that but naruto eats chunks i dont even bother with it anymore one piece is where its at
not gonna lie one piece is pretty damn good, but that comment doesn't help me though lol
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