aba1's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Opening Animation]

Why does he only have 1 wing? also the feather coming out is way larger than the rest of the feathers and is sorta pushed out rather than falling off. The image itself isn't to bad fairly generic anime style. Maybe fade in the blush on the face rather than having it just be there all of a sudden.

[Mr. Merda]

Green is not a creative colour >.>

[Kaigan: SC -- Episode 1]

It is really good for a amature production esspecially one person doing it all but this thing feels like a competition to fit in every anime cliche as fast as possible as many times as possible. You use gestures that are derived from anime so often and so fast at times they don't even all make sense.

[Directioners]

I keep hearing about this 1 direction are they like the new backstreet boys or something?

[What Represents Me]

Remember to give time to be able to read what you wrote. Also stop(); is a good funtion to stop your video from looping endlessly.

[PCA 2012]

Remember to properly size your backgrounds so your not left with clipping on either side.

[Hamlet: Act 3 Scene 1]

i'll be honest

it wasnt bad the voice work was solid and the drawings were uninspired overdone anime but really that's just the over popularization of anime getting to me the animation is where you need to work your images are decent but dont be afraid of a lil fbf at times i saw you trying to avoid as little redrawing as possable and the animation was really shaky and just looked weak over all it's not bad better than most of the submissions and i think you have potential i just wish you would try and be a little more original in your character designs even if you do see to like "random insanity" and like anime just try n change it a little bit at least so it sorta has your own feel annnnnyyyyyyyyywhhhhhhoooooooooo good work

RavenIga responds:

I'm not quite sure what you mean by the first part. This is my drawing style and those are my original character designs from my original comic. I've been drawing like this since I was a child, and I'm not about to change it because you think anime is over- popularized or "everywhere".

Yes, I was trying got a drawing redrawing but not for the reason you're thinking. I had a little under 2 weeks to put this together so yes the animation was going to be pretty weak. But thanks, I'll keep that in mind the next time I make something.

[Fernfir owns sandbag]

well

XD looks to me someone learned how to copy and paste sprites :O

[Rebalanced]

excellent

i ussually hate stickfigures unless you do them well and you did them well good use of high quality sound really gives that umph but watch your screen size the whites driften in at parts

[Link's Vacation]

okyyyyy

dont use the thickest brush possible when drawing