aba1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Making Love]

not bad

drawings ok but its more about the idea than the quality

[Winter celebrations]

yaosh

its really good just the characters feel to stifff like there dead or sumthing

Citrina responds:

Well they're not supposed to be moving around too much, it's a bit of a cliff-hanger: so Ross is trying to steal a kiss and Nort is not letting him, and then pow! pretty fireworks going off somewhere on the left, off screen, and Ross turns to watch; meanwhile seeing Ross's awareness slipping for a sec, Nort is trying to push some snow under Ross's collar, for which he needs to be cautious and not make a false move. So they both end up almost still for a moment.

[Balloon]

yaaaa

i see you know the main problem already being the atonomy the other is to much empty space it feels to empty good attempt at the paint style tho i like that

suwako responds:

yeah, there is a lot of space here, isn't there? I guess I should have added more XD and thanks so much! :D

[I Love Laquisha]

lol

you know you should leave artist comments there always fun to read but i love your colouring style but not so much your drawing style its kinda funny but i love your abstract peices aka background pics

[Attractive Wallpaper V3]

i likes

this is accually now my background somtimes the best things are the simple ones

[Don't Move]

blerp

the left hand has to strong of an outline and the thumb is very squished but the rest is great! good work with the awkward angle

[Karen O]

mmmmm

noice! i love the painted style looks really fun ^^

Malakuko responds:

hey thanks, ya it was fun, unlike alot of paintings ive done this was just fun and straight forward :)

[Who Watches the Watchmen?]

welll

this is great just i wosh u had more tones on the silk specter and the comedians face is very squished

ReneeYV responds:

Yeah, I forgot to go back and pencil in the ebony in silk spectre's hair, and yeah the comedian is a bit squished but keep in mind I did not grid this drawing out, I simply just looked at some pictures and put them together

[Snow Cave]

wow

this totally looks like a image off a magic card totally pro

Stunji responds:

Haha, thank you :)

[Inner Ichigo]

ok well

try less fan art of the same old over rated animes n try some origenal pieces

also try to scan your images if your in highschool your school should have a few at the very least lastly tho this is the only upload you have that is art portal worthy you shouldnt get discouraged keep practising i can tell you know stuff you jusst need more practise this image is pritty good decent shading good depth just missing the neck but you already relize this

maxrox responds:

I read this over again and frankly pay attention to what I have told you.
I "had" no scanner to use, I don't know where your from but the schools' scanners around my area are worse than my home scanner, which frankly I uploaded a single picture on... never again...

I do fan art because I WANT TO, like shit... get this through your head I will draw what I want to draw, you have no right to tell me what I should or shouldn't draw.

I will also disagree with how this is the only "worthy" thing for the art portal... I say "worthy" because... lets face it the art portal is a terrible thing right now, it needs a massive overhaul and reworking... but I doubt that will ever happen, but I tend to think that my Gaara picture, and Sasuke/Naruto mixed picture is "worthy".

Since you have no way to respond thanks to Newgrounds ingenious design... I frankly am going to stop... and keep the rest of my argument to myself because it'll just turn into my opinion over yours --_--